Friday, October 7, 2011

She came up for me !!!!!!!!



On a cool romantic dark night, she came up to my place knocking at the doors, wondering her presence in my home. With the cool breeze knocking the windows, clouds set to dark with the essence of rain drops touching the mother earth. I said, "Come in my girl", came running, she kissed me on my cheeks with a smile ever beautiful gorgeous women would give her guy. I went inside into cook room, lit the gas stove, a blue-orange flame flashed to glow normally. On this part, power turns off adds itself to nature's party. She came running into my cookhouse, hugged me from my back, while I was pouring the milk mixing with sugar & coffee; she said sugar isn't it enough; I asked her to follow me and took her upstairs. Browsing around the stairs, conceiving the breeze I made an attempt to ogle her. Simpering deep from my heart, with selfish thoughts, realizing that this day wouldn't be so beautiful without her, I said to myself, "When so many are lonely as seem to be lonely, it would be inexcusably selfish to be lonely alone.”


Held her hand to my right waving out shouting we are the best & happiest one found ever on this earth. A mystic squall like a mist bordered us, I knew I left her the moment I been blown off. I received a call, incautiously answering, said, "Hallo who is on the other side? Sorry I couldn't hear you, please be louder." I was dumped to the corner of terrace setting to get relaxed. On the other end, hearing to a voice saying, "She died this evening; her mom wants you to be there with them", that was a death roll wallowing to the other end to search for her. After a few minutes I was able to feel a clear breeze and see the air bordering the place where we stood. Later I realized she is no more, striking thoughts says, "The day U came in my life I felt you as my best one. I judged you not by your beauty or tone, but because I felt you as my own. Be with me as sweet heart forever". No words, cried, shouted busted by heart running over the border to see her face at last. This day made me a worst bitter physic day, the heavy downpour on the streets, wandering animals, un-comfort bike rides, final struggle to march towards to her house. Riding in search of love and peace, at a circular with a heavy blow horn poking my ears turning to slide and hit the trees finally. Later I woke up from my bed realizing it to be a dream, my mom standing nearby me with a bucket of water and banged me with the same. Cries, smiles, being potent woke up from the floor to ring up my girl, she said, "Hallo darling good evening, I'm coming home tonight"…….

9 comments:

  1. Wow!!! simply awesome , I'm happy to see a perfect writer. looking forward for the next blog

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  2. Wow!!! simply awesome , I'm happy to see a perfect writer. looking forward for the next blog

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  3. Wow!!! simply awesome , I'm happy to see a perfect writer. looking forward for the next blog

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  4. Really wat a twists...but nice finishing

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  5. Really wat a twists...but nice finishing

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  6. Twisttss and the ending was really good

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  7. Twisttss and the ending was really good

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